Looks great to me. Maybe a lil heavy on the rub but to each their own ya know. Teryiaki Tri Tip is big out here in CA...those are REALLY big here and its my go to meal for partys at 3.99 a lb but no more than that. I dredge them in the juice as well...im probably not cutting them right either but they are still great!
2008 WSM, 2000 Simpsons Smokey Joe, 2001 Platinum Blue Kettle, an 3 more i still have to identify.